Changes from first draft:
First obvious change is that the orientation has changed. After feedback which I talked about in my previous Ancillary blog post, i changed the poster to portrait. Overall I believe it looks a lot better than before.
Secondly i changed the text at the top. I changed the typeface and also changed the colour of the word "death's" to red. I think this was a good change as red is a symbolic word for death, therefore working well with the title.
I added the two apostrophes where needed in the poster as it was talked about and noticed a lot in the the feedback (see previous blog post on the poster).
Because my hand was kind of "jumping out of the scene" I edited Jak's head so it looked like it was coming out of the scene. This worked really well as it makes the picture of myself look like it was made to look like I'm reaching out of the picture, similarily to how they layer photos on film magazines such as Empire.
Finally one of the most potent changes is the fact I added another scene from our film trailer onto the poster. This is of Jak covered in blood. If you hadn't noticed I deliberately lined up the sides of Jak with the sides of my head so it looked really clean and in proportion.
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